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Old 08-24-05, 06:47 PM   #53
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Voted For: 1ndeph

Im Runnin on Blanks..and Your Full....But i'll still WriteThis
If u were Nun Thongs Deph still couldnt Contain Tightness
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Opening line made no sense, 2nd was kinda played.

Rv gave u a Chance 2 Be Great..,,,,.Whyy Didnt u Take It
CopyWritein on Elevators.. ....is how u Protect Elevation
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Nope, weak attempt at a punch, another played concept.

Real Recognize Real but 2 Me u ....startin 2 look Faceless
Cant Drop Complicated.Ya Avy said stick 2 the Basicks
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Easily your best bar.

Took you 30 minz 2 drop...........guess tha Chi's Timeless
Ya Transvestite Traits....P.rooved your Chi Towns Finest
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Nope, shit was worded horribly and had no impact.

Gave u chance to Win this..the Victory is gettin Crept On
Like Narcoleptics Reading..Ya Writtens is Gettin Slept On
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Just another played concept that you worded in ya own way, it was okay compared to some of your other bars tho.

I'll Rob ya Chump Rv Change..U betta Protect ya Wealth
Stop Fingerin ya Anal jus so u can get Indeph wit ya Self^
Thats laughable, I'm sure he doesnt care for an internet ''jackin'' and the second line seemed forced as fuck with the nameplay

Not a good verse Troop, lacked alot of creativity an the ideas for your verse was a little basic an forced upon.


I'm too much to handle,Fam you not finna win.
so fuck this battle,cause all Jimmy got in the pocket is Lent.
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nah, wasnt feelin the opener, shit was weak indeph lol.

you never sell records.You mouthin up untill you count em.
damn,you' couldn't go platinum after your millionth album.
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lol basic, but made me laugh.

You still on that jigga shit,He a biter, accept it.
I better hide my lyrics since you admire his ethics.
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I like this bar, nice flow as you read it, good personal on the jay shit too

king of the midwest?shit this really opened my eyes.
Cause if this bitch run the coast,then noone can rhyme.
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Everythin was good up until the ''noone can rhyme'' part, could of used that idea on the punch a lil more creatively lol

You were better as troop,You on a downhill slope.
You always sucked tho, so you 100 underground zero.
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the fuck? lol...Doesnt make sense to me.

slang these days,the only way your skills benifit.
cause to you bad and good must be a synonym
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nah....dunno what you was thinkin

Not a good verse either Indeph

matter fact, I thought y'all would of dropped DOPE, kinda dissapointed, but Indeph had a little more consistancy with like 2 ok bars where as troop only had 1 ok bar....

Vote=indeph for being less played and less whack.
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