OK.....im feelin the beat lol...

Ltizzle...
first off...quality isnt too great....i cant tell that you have potential right off the bat....your flow is on good at some points...but falls off in a couple...seems like your tryin to cram your words together in some points...gotta work on your pronunciation...delivery isnt too bad to start out with...but it needs some work....you mos def got potential man...no doubt....

Hook = Pure Dopeness LOL...i love it

Para....

you kinda came in weird...almost seemed like you was talking....your quality is also not too good...but...your flow needs some work....make it flow more smoothly...sounds like your letting your words catch up to the beat some....your gotta good voice to be that young though...u can mos def work with that....delivery needs some work also....

you both have potential...it just comes with time...this was mos def worth the listen...keep it up and keep droppin

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