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Old 08-25-05, 02:29 PM   #27
Traidmarx™
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this shit isn't bad.... let me break it down


1st verse - flow was polished but maybe just a lil too animated for the beat... but ya lyrics were nice......

2nd verse - nice verse nice delivery nice lyrics just a problem with the quality but i'm not gonna criticize that cause i mean that could all be changed with the right amount of editing and what not...

3rd verse - i loved this verse so many metaphors and wordplay it was nuts i liked it loved the brenda's baby line keep it up man


overall nice collab shit was good and keep doin ya thing people later holla at me if ya ever wanna put me on a track later...
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