Voted For: .:KAPITAL:.

Yo batman Im not gonna breakdown ures cos its basicly jus written bullshit, Im sorry, work on it, structure youre lines,
all of that, complexity sucks....

Ok Kaps lets go

You're here for an Instant.. then you're gone.. with grief
Cuz Kap'll rest ya case.. like putting ya folders to sleep
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Iite opener, cud have been better, set up well

Kid thinks he's better.. I got him laid out n he's bitchin
Sure you elevated Kid.. now you're in sitting position
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Lol this was a good one here, funny punch

Fuckin herb.. doesn't understand what I'm tryin to say
You're not heavyweight and never will be.. n that includes today
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Ok im not feelin this, too basic...ya feel me, work on ure structure, u settin up aiite

Bat couldn't punch.. so he kicked but his knees gave out
Then he went in for the kill.. but the moron never came out
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This shit is again pretty childish but set up aiite,

Fuck new kids to this rap.. starting shit with vets.. ya hands aren't good
I'll turn your ass so pink.. you'll have to move to Camrons hood
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Lol ok this was a good closer,

A lil advice lil man, ure shits too basic, adopt a style, complex it more, go for the kill, make punches to do with him, hes called batman rite? so play on that same with u bat, but it goes for u

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