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The Emcee Shogun
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IP:
Voted For: -UNF-
Look, I'll Put Yu Six-Deep And When The Clips-Reap And Have Ya Skull Bone Touchin-Maggots
Slaughter With Automatics, Topicals On Hetro Sex When On The Real You A Fuckin-Faggot*
rofl good punch good opener should have used a better personal
I'll Put The Lead-In-Waist And Have It Rip Thru Ya Dome And Knock Ya Head-Off-Place
Go For LightWeight Belt, Cuz Like Failures In Weight Watchers U Couldnt 'Cut It Wit HeavyWeights**
nice lmao..
Why Run... 10 Feet And Im Like Lucifer I'll Leave Ya Staminia-Wrecked Each Glock Goes Bam-Thru-Ya-Chest***
Believe Me Dude TheOnly A's I Wud Even Come Close To Feel' Rests On Top Of Ya Girls's-Chest****
could have been worded better but connected well
.:: Finish It ::.
Readily Holdin The Glock-Bitch Ready To Pop-Triks Intendin To Stop-Kids
Dude Underestimated Me, He Turned A Blind Eye On This Battle Like I Cut Out His Optics
rofl nice punch
you had some aight personals but you need work on that area the punches
all seemed to connect but you dont need to use as many multis try
using less multis it makes the verse go off and makes it sound complicated
ya know?i think you got this but you should word things better like your
last bar needs wording better and you definitaly use too many multis lol it makes
the flow go off and it makes the readed lose the track
vs
who is this herb?? ur rec's nice.. but watch him get spanked this time..
and i know your eagor to get the win.. but kid im not doctor frankenstein..
nice wordplay but didnt connect well
UNF im not violent.. so dont take this personal when i say i might kill ho'z
and i would say that your skills are kosher.. but i think ur more into Dill Doe'
rofl good punch connected
i'll strap on my kicks.. and just put the steal toed boots to your back..
and you could have some construction shoes and still be toe tally wack..
this woz aight but bit off flow good wordplay though
F.uck Y.our I.ntelligence shit kid you know that we are next to none...
So BQ give me a holla back girl.. cause its no doubt i've already won....
self glorifiying n y have u got b/q in ya verse
you had a alright verse but most of your bars had self glorifiying in them i some
way or other you should try and use more punches concentrate on them and dont just
do self glorifiying your verse seemed to be full of ideas which werent worded
properly or needed a better punchline you should work on personals as the only
personals you used was played out as rec personals are played out and i wouldnt
really class them as personals but good drop both of yu and elevate
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