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Old 08-25-05, 08:44 PM   #50
.Ike.
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Voted For: Apostrophe

Apo...

who is this herb?? ur rec's nice.. but watch him get spanked this time..
and i know your eagor to get the win.. but kid im not doctor frankenstein..
LMAO...pretty good wordplay here...7/10

UNF im not violent.. so dont take this personal when i say i might kill ho'z
and i would say that your skills are kosher.. but i think ur more into Dill Doe'
Nice....6/10

i'll strap on my kicks.. and just put the steal toed boots to your back..
and you could have some construction shoes and still be toe tally wack..
i like this...maybe could worded it better....6/10

F.uck Y.our I.ntelligence shit kid you know that we are next to none...
So BQ give me a holla back girl.. cause its no doubt i've already won....
i REALLY like the wordplay...but there wasnt really that good of a punch behind it...5/10

24/40


UNF

Look, I'll Put Yu Six-Deep And When The Clips-Reap And Have Ya Skull Bone Touchin-Maggots
Slaughter With Automatics, Topicals On Hetro Sex When On The Real You A Fuckin-Faggot*
ehh...you mad multies...but thats it...weak punch 3/10

I'll Put The Lead-In-Waist And Have It Rip Thru Ya Dome And Knock Ya Head-Off-Place
Go For LightWeight Belt, Cuz Like Failures In Weight Watchers U Couldnt 'Cut It Wit HeavyWeights**
Decent....5/10

Why Run... 10 Feet And Im Like Lucifer I'll Leave Ya Staminia-Wrecked Each Glock Goes Bam-Thru-Ya-Chest***
Believe Me Dude TheOnly A's I Wud Even Come Close To Feel' Rests On Top Of Ya Girls's-Chest****
LMAO...8/10

Readily Holdin The Glock-Bitch Ready To Pop-Triks Intendin To Stop-Kids
Dude Underestimated Me, He Turned A Blind Eye On This Battle Like I Cut Out His Optics
umm no...horrid closer...2/10

18/40



Apo just had an extremely more consistent verse....some of UNFs bars were just all multies and no real punch behind it...Apo had better wordplay...and just more complexity in his verse....although UNFs verse LOOKED to be more complex...in actuality it wasnt....and the structure on APos was better..

so overall i give this to APO for better structure, better punchlines, wordplay, and an overall more consistent verse
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