Voted For: -UNF-

Look, I'll Put Yu Six-Deep And When The Clips-Reap And Have Ya Skull Bone Touchin-Maggots
Slaughter With Automatics, Topicals On Hetro Sex When On The Real You A Fuckin-Faggot*
6...some filler in here..decent multis in set-up..good personal
I'll Put The Lead-In-Waist And Have It Rip Thru Ya Dome And Knock Ya Head-Off-Place
Go For LightWeight Belt, Cuz Like Failures In Weight Watchers U Couldnt 'Cut It Wit HeavyWeights**
5...set-up had a forced multi...but a good punch again
Why Run... 10 Feet And Im Like Lucifer I'll Leave Ya Staminia-Wrecked Each Glock Goes Bam-Thru-Ya-Chest***
Believe Me Dude TheOnly A's I Wud Even Come Close To Feel' Rests On Top Of Ya Girls's-Chest****
4....this was ite...but multis seemed to be off the punch again
.:: Finish It ::.
Readily Holdin The Glock-Bitch Ready To Pop-Triks Intendin To Stop-Kids
Dude Underestimated Me, He Turned A Blind Eye On This Battle Like I Cut Out His Optics
2...funny you say "finish it" when this is one of your worst bars

First thing you need to fix is your structure.It was good damn horrible.Some punches were really good and creative like the topical one in the first bar.But some was just..blah..like the last 2 ones.The 2nd to last bar..with the A thing...it woulda been better with some better wording.The set-up n shit was like...off.I notice you have too much filler.But overall..a decent verse with some good punches.

who is this herb?? ur rec's nice.. but watch him get spanked this time..
and i know your eagor to get the win.. but kid im not doctor frankenstein..
2...why in the world would you say he has a good rec?..punch was weak
UNF im not violent.. so dont take this personal when i say i might kill ho'z
and i would say that your skills are kosher.. but i think ur more into Dill Doe'
4...better than the previous one
i'll strap on my kicks.. and just put the steal toed boots to your back..
and you could have some construction shoes and still be toe tally wack..
3...toe tally whack...horrible!!
F.uck Y.our I.ntelligence shit kid you know that we are next to none...
So BQ give me a holla back girl.. cause its no doubt i've already won....
1...now your self glorifing

Best thing you had goin in that verse was the structure.The rest was BLAh.I absolutely hated that 1st line...why would you say "ur rec's nice' ?I understand you said he's gonna get spanked this time..but man...don't give props.And that last bar with the Bq shit...self glorifing.

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