Voted For: .Lola Cruez. II

Stanza-Ok...flow was defenity where you shined.Stayed constant throughout the whole verse.Vocab was "blah".I don't know if you were tryna make it funny..but it wasn't.....so I assume the concept you had was..lonelness at the top.And for that type of topic..you need to be emotional n shit.Yours wasn't.It seemed to be too basic with execution.Decription and shit was mediocre.I'm just being honest....work on wording.Cause I didn't sense a trace of imajery or emotion in it.Flow was the best thing you had.....

LoLA-Creative topic.God taking a shit?...nice job with that..Vocab n shit was on point. Imajery Emotion..... w/e.....it was all there.Only thing was that flow was off at some points.I noticed a couple of lines didn't even rhyme.And that's a no-no.Make every line rhyme.And learn to compress the lines so that only the core is left.Kinda like battlin..you can't have filler...in this..you can't have too much unessary shit.And I noticed your wording itself was a lil bland.When readin it..some lines...just seemes to sound weird coming after the other one.Take the 1st 3 lines for example...poor wording as the lines sounded odd when coming after another.

Overall-Stanza has a far better flow in this battle..But everything else LoLa had . Creativity , Imajery, Emotion .. blah-blah...all belonged to her.

Vote-LoL Cruez