weerd i like the beat
intro is is kidna ehh though...not too big of a deal
your vocals could benefit from being turned up a lil bit...

lyrically wise its not bad
but your emotion really needs to be upped
it just sounds like your reading it off something
and the flow bores me a bit, like it could be more interesting....mix it up here and there wit some nice multis or something, nah mean?

but yea, i think this could be an ok track if those two thigns were fixed...
emotion and flow
other than that its coo
quality is nice, wish mines was like that

keep working though

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