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beat is nice, tizz ur flow is off and u keep havin to kinda get off beat to fit all ur words in.. i like the idea tho

hook is dope....

Para, i'd never heard you before so i dunno what to compare it to, but you didnt seem to have any flow at all in this one.. no hate, but u could have worked on that and emotion... and well, your lyrics could have used some work too....

honest feed fams....

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