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Old 08-26-05, 02:34 AM   #9
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Voted For: Young Blaze

iight i aint trynna suck add when i say blaze got this fo sho....cos he came up with harder punches and his structure was gd together with the flow...
This Kids ZONES All Fucked Wit the Ak'S So Now Everythin's Red
plus Hes Kno for Givin Dome...Like a tuff constrution worker
.................................................. ..........he gives Hard Head

^^ that was a very decent opner..had gd wodplay and hit harder than ur opponent's

and even thought your whole verse was entertainin and filled with gd personals,your closer was kinna weak but overall ur verse was much more on track...gd job


RED...all u did was talk about urself...in other words you were selfglorifyin...which took u off track and ur punches didnt hit hard enuff to deal with blaze...opner was weak and some likes like


cauz I peeped ya flow, ya lines kill you every time wit that flow thas suicidal...

^^ that was kinna aimless and slightly senseless...no hate but it was...

BUT to compliment you,u had a decent closer and that is



I'm poison so mah verbal venom is a hazard ta you...
if your Jerzy's Finest, I bet tha whole state is embarrassed by you...

^^ nice personal...and w/p

but u still didnt keep it hittin...no much entertainin wordplay..xcept one...so with this my vote goes to blaze for a much more consistent verse which,to me,was really on track hittin harder and harder...
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