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Old 08-26-05, 04:42 AM   #10
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Voted For: Young Blaze

Young Blaze

This Kids ZONES All Fucked Wit the Ak'S So Now Everythin's Red
plus Hes Kno for Givin Dome...Like a tuff constrution worker
.................................................. ..........he gives Hard Head
^nice closer, had dope wordplay formed into punch......8/10

This Guy Is Fucked Only Beats Ass When He Lies On Butts
High Off Dust Red Couldn’t Pack A House If He Was A Ryder Truck
^both hardhitting punches and good wordplay.............7/10

I'll throw Slugz at Red,Dissolve his chest turn his lungs to Salt
Battlin Blaze This bitch better learn to 'roll wit the punches'
……………………………...........like Mike Tyson doin Sum-mer-saults
^first line is bit bleh but second is hot, consistent with wordplay........7/10

So U gettin A win Aint Gonna Happen Dont Hold Yah Breath
This Like Playin Sports wit the GRim Reaper U Got Picked For Death
^nice wordplay again in second line, first good built-up.....7/10

Im Callin Ill-Legal Play Ref Threw A Red FLag At Yah Zone
AN like Listen to Death Metal In yah Cd player.............
............................i Got The Chrome To Kill Yah headPhones
^not really feelin the punch in this one, first line was funny though.......6/10

When I Blow My Fuse I'ma Make u Fold N Bruise Wit ColdAbuse
Ya Like Cheap Budget Moviez...Cuz u'll Never Roll Wit Cruise(Crews)
^hot personal in second line, good built-up, finished em off nicely.......8/10

Total: 43/60 = 72%

REDZONE

I'm automatic when it's battle that I leave you a slave...
Red tha OLD EXSTINGUISHER, easily I'll put away a YOUNG BLAZE...
^good wordplay, bit self-glorifying in beginning maybe....6/10

I saw ya interest is killin mc's, you made a mistake in ya title...
cauz I peeped ya flow, ya lines kill you every time wit that flow thas suicidal...
^haha, nice punch with a personal touch, good bar.......8/10

I'm here ta piss ya off, I'm RedZone, dawg I'll get cha BODY SPRAYED...
I'll piss in ya face, while bullets engrave in ya waves or unloosen braids...
^uhm no real punch in fact, just self-glorifying.........4/10

they call me KING where I'm from, you probably a FIEND where you from...
I could easily steal ya block, permanently leave you neva seen where you from...
^uhm rhyming with same word is lame, decent bar I guess......5/10

kidnap ya bitch , rape tha slut and make tha cum skeet out on ya girl...
mah rhymes must not exist if ya words are "Out of this world"...
^hehe funny bar right here....6/10

I'm poison so mah verbal venom is a hazard ta you...
if your Jerzy's Finest, I bet tha whole state is embarrassed by you...
^lmao at the last line.....7/10

Total: 36/60 = 60%

Vote goes to Young Blaze for more complexity in his punches and such, good flow as well. REDZONE had solid battle verse but could've had more consistency in the punches.
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