Voted For: -UNF-

Let me break this down


-UNF-
Look, I'll Put Yu Six-Deep And When The Clips-Reap And Have Ya Skull Bone Touchin-Maggots
Slaughter With Automatics, Topicals On Hetro Sex When On The Real You A Fuckin-Faggot*
3/5 it was an ok personal
I'll Put The Lead-In-Waist And Have It Rip Thru Ya Dome And Knock Ya Head-Off-Place
Go For LightWeight Belt, Cuz Like Failures In Weight Watchers U Couldnt 'Cut It Wit HeavyWeights**
3/5 not too good..coulda been more creative
Why Run... 10 Feet And Im Like Lucifer I'll Leave Ya Staminia-Wrecked Each Glock Goes Bam-Thru-Ya-Chest***
Believe Me Dude TheOnly A's I Wud Even Come Close To Feel' Rests On Top Of Ya Girls's-Chest****
4/5 i was feelin this line..made me laugh

.:: Finish It ::.
Readily Holdin The Glock-Bitch Ready To Pop-Triks Intendin To Stop-Kids
Dude Underestimated Me, He Turned A Blind Eye On This Battle Like I Cut Out His Optics
3/5 ok wordplay..not really feelin it as a good closer

13/20 - You had consistent personals which is always good in a battle. A little wordplay at the end. Your flow was a little weird. You had some good multis also. The only thing I would say is that your lines I felt were a little streched. And the personals weren't the greatest but they worked alright for me.


Apostrophe
who is this herb?? ur rec's nice.. but watch him get spanked this time..
and i know your eagor to get the win.. but kid im not doctor frankenstein..
2/5 Yes I understand the frankenstein connection but it really didnt hit hard at all
UNF im not violent.. so dont take this personal when i say i might kill ho'z
and i would say that your skills are kosher.. but i think ur more into Dill Doe'
4/5 had me laughing
i'll strap on my kicks.. and just put the steal toed boots to your back..
and you could have some construction shoes and still be toe tally wack..
2/5 wasnt feeling the wordplay
F.uck Y.our I.ntelligence shit kid you know that we are next to none...
So BQ give me a holla back girl.. cause its no doubt i've already won....
1/5 really wack closer


9/20 - You had some decent wordplay. The thing that I was missing from you is personals. I really didn't see any. You did have a good punch with the dill doe line. Your flow was good and your structure had no problems.




-UNF- wins this battle due to his ability to come out with consistent personals.

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