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Old 08-26-05, 05:53 AM   #13
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Voted For: .:KAPITAL:.

Holy Crap.

KAPITAL - your verse was makin me laugh. you had some nice punches and wordplay there. the sitting position line was pretty good. the only thing i woulda liked to see are some personals. cause that makes it better. your kill line was pretty good as well...8/10


Batman - wow. and thats not a good wow. you need to work on making some punches. you had some really lame lines. work on creativity using wordplay and personals. there are tutorials at the bottom of the RV page to help you with this. overall i wasnt feeling your verse. sorry man. 1/10


KAPITAL wins