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Old 08-26-05, 06:03 AM   #20
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Voted For: Reflekt

Facin' Kon...Better Prey Famz...'Cause like Kidd My Lines Stay On Point..
Family? u aint got none....ur funeral Ima be wit ur mom, Smokin a joint..
meh.....ok punch didnt hit hard
Im merkin this fag..Let the Hollow burst through his leg...Sit down Son..
Wen i lerk thru ya bag...i see purses and thangs..Homo? we found one..
again didnt hit well
Smash this kid vocally....so this fag can really Carry Mikes on his back..
Dont mistake me..If i see u at cha show...i guarantee u gettin clapped..
aight bit of wordplay punch didnt work
You aint hard Mayn...let your guard down...and BLLAT.......its finished..
Cuz my heat stays hot............make your grave your personal kitchen..
w/e...lol dont rhyme but aight wordplay
but i aint tryna end it Nice......i show mercy on the weak..........speak..
And ill leave ya like the doctor in saw............Have 'em missin his feet..
aight i suppose......

i think you need a lot of work on your personals i have sen you this looks rushed and fells to me olike u cant be assed but work on ya punches ya wordplay woz aight i didnt really feel any lines in ya verse tho

Reflekt will take it to your city..and leave lumps on you like a camel son
And I'm not from "Detroit" but still I could "Rip Hamilton"*
rofl nice opener
Judging by the looks of things..We'd have to say Tha Q is your hero
Who else would take half naked pictures with 2 guys in front of mirrors?**
lol quite nice could have been worded better
Your rhymes worst than 50 Cent..so I'm saying youre worth a quarter
Cause the only time you're the best to come out of Canada..is when I throw you over the border
rofl nice......
You get no love from RV..it's a fact Amerikaz Nightmare is not the best dawg
Yeah you live in dreams..but that's only when your songs are slept on

this verse was packed wid consistent personals and punches which connected well in all lines i dont need to break it down more ref took it as he had more punches n personals which conected...One.
Finally i'll flip your name in reverse..but be still cause there more
I'll take the .nok out so you can Drop To The Floor***
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