This was nice... I liked the concept.

With two people collabing on a thing like this it would have been dope to have both perspectives... But what you did still works.

Mad Knight: Flow was real square... not square as in uncool, but like.. rigid. It was there, but the length of the lines was a bit long so I sort of missed it.. Just didnt seem fluid... -_-. To improve it, try using multis occasionally, making syllable counts better and maybe adding some inners here and there.

All other elements were pretty sound... Vocab needs to be expanded a bit.. practice does that.

It was dope though. 8/10

Mizz Fyre: You know what you're doing.. dont really have anything to tell you.

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