Voted For: KhAoZ ThEoRy

fraud

Fuck a 6, u get-a-four-fith n I spit-a-whole-clip… then ‘SHOVE-L’s(shovels) like wat u use to ‘dig-a-hole-with’…
^nice wordplay in opener but no real punch actually 6/10

I’m killin-him, this is a ‘crime’, but u already know that I sin-hard…
so after this murder, R.V police i'll ‘put me in a CELL’ like ya ‘sim-card’…
^again dope wordplay but you didn't bring your opponent down 6/10

This is easy, nigga I retire-the-barriers… Who want it? I’m givin this kid his ‘NEXT-L’(Nextel) like the ‘WireLess-Carrier’!
^again dope wordplay in closer 7/10

Total: 19/30 = 63%, got the wordplay down but need more hardhitting punches


KhAoZ ThEoRy

Dude, take notes from your sig, Its YOUR Rhymes that are a Fraud
Only time you in control of a win....is if you was workin a Scoreboard
^hehe, nice opener, cool punch 8/10

Dear lord....Please dont hate him cause he ugly, an bless him with skill...
You could become a sucide bomber, an you still wont be ''built for the kill''
^lmao, nice wordplay right here 9/10

I'm at the top of the hill, your trynna Re-up from Rock Bottom...
Too end herbs like you I flatline...........Or in other words, I DOT-EM..........................................
^aight wordplay, not very hardhitting though but still cool 6/10

Total: 23/30 = 77%, last bar could've been better, nice overall though

Link is in my sig...

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