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ight b honest wit ya it was ok but not as good as it could have been u need 2 expand ur vocab, structure was tha best thang bout it, throw sum meta's in tha mix 2 liven it up also but keep workin' at it continue 2 write & keep ya head up ~1~LUV~1~THUG~
rtf: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=206095
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