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it was a good bored free but 1 thang is don't jumble all ya words 2getha cuz it makes tha reader have 2 try real hard 2 catch tha flow & tempo of it, structure needs fixin, try 2 elevate in ur rhyming game step it up more, use sum meta's in ur lyrics 2 liven it up fa sho ight ~1~LUV~1~THUG~
rtf: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=206095
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