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Old 08-26-05, 05:36 PM   #23
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Voted For: KhAoZ ThEoRy

Fraud had some mad stretched stuff, you need to work on your wording and structure for sure. Your wordplay was alright, wasn't anything special, reasonably creative, but a bit simple. Just an average verse.

Khaoz, I really liked the first punch, good creativity and worded well. Suicide bomber was decent, but nothing more, and the flatline was overly complex, didn't make much sense to me but you still took this battle relatively easily.

v/ Khaoz Theory
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