Coming to Kill you All
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Voted For: Drakel
The jump off..adding an "N" after the "A" before you speak
So "Dr.Ankel" will feel more comftorable when he experiences "de-feet"
^^these kinda lines..defeat/da-feet are played..3/10
All of his drops get replies but let me tell you something
Half the responses are Drakel pleading "Come on man. Upping"
^^^umm....decent i guess??...5/10
Check it..You're never respected in text..The reason's obvious and blatent
Can't face you're outdated..Flow's like your avatar..Ancient(avy is a dinosaur)
^^basic rip on avatar...but still a personal i guess..5/10
Infected by dyslexia..this bastard's faker than actors
Wanted to knock him senseless..Wait..Already spelt his country's name backwards(it says he's from Adanac..that backwards is Canada)
^^Weak becuz I think..... he wanted to spell it backwards..3/10
We give respect where its due..You get none..Heart of a statue cuz
And like unaware vampire victims..RV is stumped..Drakel...uh?(Dracula)
^^drakel-uh?..drac-u-la...it has to match sllyable for sllyable..n u missed the 'U'..so this is forced wordplay....plus the 1st line the cuz shit was a forced rhyme....2/10
Flipped a coin and he got way too excited to choose heads
I gave him skittles..told him Taste The Rainbow..so he ran to Q's thread
^^I like this bar.....6/10
Punches lacked.You had played shit...like the defeat/de-feet one.Then there was shit that was basic..like the avatar rip one.You gotta get creative with your shit more.And that backwards one..you just stated it...and I think that drakel meant to spell it like that.But the worst line was the drakel-uh/dracula one.It was a forced rhyme with the cuz/uh one and it was forced wordplay.Get your shit together dawg.
sab already has it bad, even a fat chance is looking slim
so im destroying his record, using his own name against him
^^wasn't feelin this one....4/10
shove a steak to ya, it aint rare, but you're getting well done
im not hittin up your cezar collab...but my hits will give you one
^^good...7/10
hoofin' this dewd, you wont make it with no style, just va-moose
so im tyin' the knot in this battle, so sab can be in the noose/news
^^noose/news?....these are similar sounding words..but with a wordplay like this..you need homophones..so this was forced....3/10
sab never turns on his game, he's stuck wondering how to pivot
shit, he always sees 'ell..........like a hateful british
^^Good..creative and hard hittin...8/10
this dude's down a deep hole......is story is one sad scoop
the only time i've lost 21....was as a kid shooting hoops
^^good personal wordplay...7/10
zebra....screw what they say, ya can't buck up to me, aint part of the herd
text is bull, so mine's sweeping you quicker than computer nerds
^^NAh....3/10
OK..a good verse tho it still had it's faults.Some punches..well..str8 up..were weak.Like the nerd one.But the biggest problem was probably the noose/news one.You can't make wordplay like that using words that sound "similar'.It has to be str8 homophones.But I think you got this easy for the 21 line/british e'll..and the other personals.
Vote-Drakel
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