Voted For: Way Forward

this dude thinks hes dope, hired a ghostwriter an still lacks creativity
u could 'blow up' in a nuclear powerplant, and still have no 'radio activity'
hiding behind the alias of being a killa, dog please save your pride
it'll be known worldwide, be prepared to loose your rep once we collide
new to the site so what i lack in personals i make up with flow
in spite of my 'noobie' status i wont hesitate to deflate your ego
let me switch-up-my-style as i figure out if ur verse-is-worthwhile
im-lyrically-versatile, words-oh-so-hostile and-incredibly-vile
i'll leave ya body aligned-wit-blasts cause there's a pussy behind-that-mask
alternating-contrasts of being wack and dope, im the latter and up- to- the-task
of lyrically-dismantling-ur-frame and corrupting the workings-of-ur-brain
have people forgettin-ur-name as i prove to all your-lyrically-lame

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ur hiding outta sighting cuz dickridin n bitin...they stay for herbs
this battle's like slappin a pit-bull cuz you go that way for-werds (foward)*
scorch ur skeleton n leave the gashes dark-toned n ur mind disowned
as for personals?..this guy's an unsolved mystery cuz he's unknown
rip you from head to toe n shred this hoe n make you suck up this shotty
like a grave robber raided a cemetery cuz who the fuck is this no-body?
foward's an unskilled magican cuz all his shit is not worth the while/wile
u shouldn't smile cuz you got as much skill as you got words in your profile
hiding the facts to ur life cuz u stacked to bite from the site,don't lie
u shouldn't have registered here...you ain't shit and your style's demise
don't even try to step faggot,I'll merk you in text,topical,graphics,or audio
lasing your toes...so don't wonder why I'm half assing this unknown hoe

way forward- Multis metaphors an punches were on lock. Good overall verse. You did your best at personals but it cool though cuz you are also new. 8/10

killa- Nice verse. Hard hitting an good with personals. I didnt see as manyt good multis as way had. you had personals though an i liked that. Use more metaphors.


BreakDown:
punches: Tie
personals: Killa
flow: Tie
Strucutre: Tie
complexity- Tie
multis: Forward
creativity:tie
Wordplay- Forward

v/ forward for wordplay because punches from both apponenets were good an forward out did him on wordplay....

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