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Old 08-27-05, 02:34 PM   #3
Ysdat
Whys That?
 
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Listening.....


beat nice... deep soundingshit right off the bat.


singing is ok,emotion is deep. Quality is good. hook is nice.

You allways singing about bitches huh..oops I mean your girl..
This track is ok, Im talking to you on aim now so I played it a couple of times, at first i didnt find it up to that level of industry standard,but after hearing it a couple oif times it becomes kinda catchy.

What i would focus on is your approach,at times our some what mumbling, not strong,just not pronouncing your words 100% clear.
apart from that this tracks all good.
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