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Old 08-27-05, 02:48 PM   #2
Triple_N
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typing as I listen....ok first verse vocals is low as hell I cant hear what he saying....an from what I hear his delivery is ass....wow his verse emotionless....maybe if I heard what he was saying he woulda passed but that was terrible....now 2nd dude comes in good vol....he got a young/corny voice....his rhymes is simple as hell.....lyrics is eh as well...I am not feeling this at all so far......ok LV comes in decent vol.....ok same flow u always use.....delivery is decent at best but yet the best on song so far.....the rhyme scheme is wack....it gets boring after a while....u stuck wit same one thru whole song....it got old after the 6th bar.....if u had a stronger delivery it wouldn't have been so obvious....overall this was a big dropoff for you LV..I aint gon front this was wack as hell to me...I'm jus being real no hate involved at all....stay up....1
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