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Old 08-27-05, 03:12 PM   #17
Triple_N
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Props to spul on looping this shit.....ah'ight here we go.....decree...ya vocals is low...but I can hear you.....ok son u gotta come more original u took a 50 cent type approach to this....which = wackness to the 10th power...flow was cool....delivery needs to be upped.....ok tizzle quality is terrible but vocals can be heard......ya delivery needs alot of work....flow was decent needs work as well...lyrically typical...overall not bad tho.....I know both yall relaitvely new to the game....so this is def an improvement for both yall...jus keep elevating an dropping.....1
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