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Old 08-27-05, 03:35 PM   #43
Triple_N
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ok nice beat choice...spul ya flow has def gotta alot better...delivery has also improved alot as well...now wit all that said it still needs upping...u coulda came harder an more diverse...lyrically it was eh but u was solid every where else...hook was best u ever did....u surprised me wit dat 1...catchy hook good shit there....tizzle...quality is eh...flow is ok..delivery could be alot stronger...but you'll get better wit time...lyrically nothing special.....decree......flow was somewhat robotic....you would lightly drag on words but it was still somewhat robotic....delivery was guru like which is more talkish than rthymic...however u had a best lyrics out the group decent punches...played an simplisitic but decent....u def surpirsed me...keep it up son...good shit
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