This is my favorite beat right now, and I'm mad that no one asked me to do this collaboration on it, but thats coo, lol

verse 1 - Really good storyline, and how you delivered it was good also. But your flow was a little off at the end of a few bars, which through me off a little. Overall, really good.

last verse - Running water, in the background. So the quality is your main problem. The effect on your voice made it seem that your were in the bathroom somewhere. Your flow and storyline was on point, but quality is diffinity your henderance on this track.

Overall - 7.8/10

good track.

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