beat choice is good.....

Long as intro..............seriously, i agree with Limited, i believe you should have started around 25 seconds into the beat

Overall - song was ok, but too short.............in the intro, vocal volume needs to be turned down......Vocab was good and storyline was well develop, but your delivery needs to be more complex....more emotion............

outro - good message.....
7/10 - decent track...

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