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Old 08-27-05, 05:27 PM   #6
G Deuce
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beat is an ok choice....

vibe - his flow was off at the beginning, and it seemed that you was forcing more words then needed, but you corrected overtime. Vocab is decent, and storyline also.

Dabato - turn the volume up on the chorus a little, cause you could barely hear it at the beginning. Your flow was ok, but great storyline and delivery. Vocab was decent.

Overall, decent track.

7.3/10
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