pain is weakness leaving the body
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not sure if it was emotional or well-worded..... nice poem.......... i had to read it a couple times, but all the great poems have different interpretations anyway. flow doesn't apply; good structure........ nice piece overall.
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"I don't want to be deep... I want to feel deep and use that feeling to express depth itself..."
-Konchance
my poetry:
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