Voted For: c.ghost

c- ghost - better structure from you, ok flow decent punches, not all hit but pretty much all did, u had some wordplay but you need to elevate on getting more in etc. use more complex vocab next time though.

name - ok punches, only a few connected. u need to use more personals and more wordplay, also more complexer vocab

v/c.ghost. reasons above.

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