View Single Post
Old 08-27-05, 08:47 PM   #8
Way Forward
New to RV
 
Posts: 49
From: U.K.
IP:

Voted For: .Mystique.

infinite - you have fixed your structure from last battle, but your punches are still pretty weak, you need to get more personal and use better wordplay and more complexer vocab. ok verse though.

mystique - you dropped pretty decent, good flow and good punches throughout. ur structure came out a little weird but tis cool. as i keep saying use betetr vocab more complexer. use harder wordplay too. you came harder than him.

v/mystique reasons above.
__________________
Send a message via AIM to Way Forward