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Old 08-27-05, 10:08 PM   #24
M&rk
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Voted For: TheSinnister

That You Make, Sometimes I make Simmilar Mistakes
Like Your Mother Having You, Or Having The Condom Break
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this one good punch won the battle cuz it was the only one in the whole battle... creative and it hit

sin-
yo, this "hollow" will really fuck up your view of the "horizon"*
my rhymes are like blinding disco lights, fucking dazaling them
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this had wordplay but similies aint good and this isn't a punch its talkin about you and not dissin 'em
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u aint no sinner, bitch ur purer than fucking holy water
your win record is like a dick all da way in a pussy, not going any farther
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decen't punch but sayin someones record isn't goin any farther isn't really a punch also it was another similie
should said sumin like..
my fresh battle style take this match your old and a sittin duck
and ya wins column must have erectile disfuctin cuz it aint gettin up
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see that was a metafour
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anyway PLEASE RETURN THE FAVOR... link in my sig
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