pain is weakness leaving the body
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Voted For: .Mystique.
honestly had a hard time catching both flows; these verses would probably sound better than they look. basic voc. from both of u means this came down to punches. Mystique obviously had stronger punches, but both of u could have done better.....
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"I don't want to be deep... I want to feel deep and use that feeling to express depth itself..."
-Konchance
my poetry:
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