Voted For: NaRc-UzI

my vote is for narc-uzi

Structure-Narc-uzi's structure was better, had good flow...it was obvious...narc-uzis lines matched up every line.....hotshh ur verse was not that well structurized.....up on that

Personals-Both had good persoansl but hotshh's personals were more plain too see and harder hitting narc-uzi's personals were not as appealing to the eye

Punches-I felt that narc-uzi's punches were harder hitting and more comedic......meaning the reader was appealed to them......hotshh had top punches also but fell short to narc-uzi

Multis-Niether really had any good multis that effected there versee...both up on ya multis in ur verse.....so tie in this catergorie

Vocab-Biggest word in this battle was gymnastics.....so again neither can be voted on this catergorie....both up on your vocab.....

Originality-I felt both verses were fresh and original but again its the readers opinion to whose is better and in my eye its narc-uzi's i felt his punches were more dominant that hotshh so

v/narc-uzi

rtf if you want on my battle vs. mizz fyre

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