*sigh*...I see a lot of problems here now.First..the biggest...you didn't rhyme a lot.

"look when you diss a nigga u supposed to make him feel
next time come harder so you at least had an attempt to kill"

"you is known as the clown of the site, cuz ur style is languished
the methodology of my diss, is simple: your drops are rubbish"

"and that gots me astonished, how can a nigga be so insulted
you must have dissed many cats on a single stunt, man"

"What's an Elbow Grease?, look on a dicitonary you sucka
and when you do look at nice words that won't get yo stucked up"

"many cats on here look forward to beef and finish like Bums
Bonecollector chill out, I don't wanna have ta collect yo bones"


^^As you can see..these bars do not rhyme.Even accented...it'd be tough to make it rhyme.I noticed you had no multis..internals that mattered..nothing.Flow was bad.

And as for content.Your style was generic.I wasn't feeling that.And your explamations..I think you needed some links for some.Like that one about him dissing you and not having any personals.Put a link to show it.Same with the one about him makin a diss to everyone.Links.

You need some work.