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Old 08-28-05, 12:40 AM   #17
MurDah
Banned: Biting
 
Posts: 806
This was feedback posted for pictureperfect2

IP:

You'll get sonned, & I'll whore-eyes-n' put an end to your sight.*
& if you think you MAY win, bitch I got 11 more months on my side.
nice word-play meta....

You won't be perfect, after I rip picture out of the frame.
Cuz' he was born with an L - like Sam Jacksons' government name.
streched,

Even w/ a hot chick PP can't get/be hard, it's a mystery .
So I'll dish 2 swipes to open your chest, & add in-salt to injury.

2ed line u've fliped it, i've spit something like that befor i said, i'll stab ya punches just to add insult to injury...
still decent flip...

some decent punches... nice verse...





this kid is the shit at rapping.... yo i surrender
cuz if your mr. lyricist..........
........... u dissed all of rap and my gender
decent

avy a pimp? yet ya skill w/ a girl is the same as a bar
and ya heard he said he was rusty...........
............................................ even outside of his car\
aight

if this kid was offered head i know what he'd choose
cuz i read his verse............
.............and saw he doesn't put brains to use
aww nice punch here good ending

close battle but pictureprefect just edge this out close battle nice punches good fight