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Old 08-28-05, 05:06 AM   #4
Paranoid
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this is a cool lil piece i know you key'd it but its good, nice multiples man, you need to use camas to show your emotion haha, flow is good stucture is good imager is very good, nice vocabulary and you used a good choice of words, just a nice lik piece man, i'd like to see you do more open mics then just do one like this, i remember them days when you us to drop lots, anyway nice shit man

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