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Old 08-28-05, 08:14 AM   #10
Jay Royal
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From: Oulu,FIN
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Voted For: Intermental

okay lets see.........

inter:u got nice flow,but ur punches didnt hit that hard,
u got couple nice personals and quality was gd....

Bullets Burst-Precision, Cant ‘See Me’ I ‘Hurt-Ya-Vision’
And They Will No Doubt ‘Cut Off The Stan’ Like A ‘Circumcision’!!
nice opener...could be still harder but gd
The Knife-To-Ya-Chest, Swipe-N-Ya-Breath, Put This Dike-To-His-Rest
Much ‘Respect To BIG’, But This Time There Is No ‘Life-After-Death’!!
lol..that second line was dope.......nice
il incision~lyrics, beat u in “text” and add sum “visions~with it”/
like how im quick to walk through “STAN'S barz like “prison~visits”//
2nd line is gd...not best 1
like “jigsaw puzzles” ur rhyming is “outa place” so INTER shud make a note/
to use more multis…coz u cudnt hit a “flow” if u fell out a “boat”//
lol...nice closer.......

7/10

stan:
ur elevated man..u camed lot more harder than with me,
but u could still elevate with flow and personal...u really havent any personals.....



you sound like a bitch with the biggest discrace//
callin me out, im about to put chu in your own place//
...hmm....what is this about...put u in your own place...first was ok..second..nah
Intermental should switch his ass into heavy metal//
its getting personal , your about to be disabled//
this was maybe ur best punch.....nice
dont ever think u could come in my thread & insult me//
listen up and take a note of my new key/can u see me//
....this wasnt as gd............
imma beat chu and put chur ass in FEDEX//
im wasting time chatting, especially my cre-DEETS//...
ok closer...

sorry to vote against u stan but..he camed harder..keep elevating...no hate
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