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Old 08-28-05, 10:03 AM   #35
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leave you rest'n pz's
 
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Voted For: Mimesis

mim-some nice stuff, very consistent in the beginning n what not, closer was funny, basically you commanded this battle throughout.imo i think your lines could be shourtened a touch
thats about the only improvement i could say your style/verse needs.... good shit overall....
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unf-im a fan of multi's, but your verse wasnt close to using them effectively, alot of filler that hurt your verse....cuz your setups were basically identical to your punches... with that said, i saw no creativity or decent wordplay throughout..
you were out leveled here yo...pz
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vote/mim, way more consistent with punches throughout the battle
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!