Damn, your flow sounds like biggie more on this track then anything else.....

Beat - smooth, slow but effective.....

chorus - I really like the chorus, and the metaphors that you use to show the topic of this song was complex and perceptive.... "Everytime i look up, i see my soul, is like a knife..." - deep shit....

verse 1 - Very good delievery. Storyline was great......and your transition from each bar was smooth.....Great wordplay

verse 2 - Another good verse, but not as good as the first. Still a decent verse...

Overall - really good song that i would listen to....

8.5/10

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