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Old 08-28-05, 11:03 AM   #13
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You wanted me to drop feedback........lol is kinda hard if going against some Trigga fam............

But i will drop feedback for both of you.....

Willa - vocals are too loud....delivery was good, and flow was on point......you're actually better than i thought you would be. Your problem, it seemed that you worried more on if you hit the beat more than being effective with what you say. It also seemed on a few bars, you forced it out. Just be more confident with what you say, and your forcing of the words will deminish. Good drop though.

Intermental - Damn man, whats up wit the intro.....lol.......

Quality - needs to be improved.....you have the same problem as willa
You're flow was decent, beat choice was good. If i hear another line about putting something on layaway, I'm going to scream, lol. Your drop was short also. Work on your delivery and make it more complex, because your punchlines seemed average.

But there you go both...................good drops........
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