Batman

yo u wanna battle me all i got to say is nigga please
you better get in line bitch cuz theres sum merkage fees
No
all kinds of people wanna battle me cuz they think i aint good
but they aint sayin that when i wreck they hood
No
this might be added to your record but its still another loss
man u aint got no salad for bitches to toss
Wack
i know it wasnt your idea for this battle but dont back out
ive seen ur battles and i knew i was gonna win without a damn doubt
No
please nigga u cant measure up to me son
i listend to larry the cable guy and i got-r-dun*
Wack!!

Elevate on punches persoanls wordplay an flow. Use multis an metaphors too. Your whole verse was self glory. Boring to read

NiggaPlease

On this site hes a herb he calls him self bat man
But behind his computer screen hes really a fat man
ok
My lyrical flowz will bust ya head nuff said
This nigga couldnt winna battle even if he bit the frontlines thread
okay
They talkin bout this cat sayin he whack well its true
Cuz even ciarra got bigga goodies than you
HAHAHa ok
In this thread he will be known for the l
This cat couldnt be hott if he were rappin in hell
played
Its too late, past the time to elevate
He needa new name Time for his comp to regenerate
Good
All his power his skill is undefined
Whats up wit that name? what goes on in ur mind
No

This was an okay verse. Ive seen better from you. Punches were okay. You had one that was played out but thats cool. You could use more multis. I liked the structure an flow.... Keep it up..

BreakDown
Punches- NiggaPlease
Personals- NiggaPlease
Flow-NiggaPlease
Strucutre- Tie
Complexity- Tie
Creativity- NiggaPlease

v/ NiggaPlease for the reasons above.

I am in his crew so this is only feedback...

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