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Old 08-28-05, 11:27 AM   #13
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~Sonofisis~ breakdown!

Battlin u, I couldn't Be Hurt, He's a Bitch, Look In His Purse!
Recyclin Trash, don't u know that ain't Good For The Earth?
Tha opener was aiight,but recyclin trash is good for tha earth!,so that line didnt have any kind of effect...3/10

And, Somebody's Hand stays up your ass like "Gay Puppets"
He ain't showin his battle record coz he's Ashamed Of It
aiight punch,nice personal..but sorta played at tha begining..heard it before..
5/10


Barz Of Steel? plz, u never Went To Jail
dude, ya "Barz" is rusty, like Alcatraz' old Prison Cells
Play on tha name?..Couldve been better but still hit,Hah!..5/10

Plus I keep Heaters to Squeeze
Or my left hook'll put u to "sleep", so u can Beat Me In ya Dreams!
Closer was weak an played as fuck...3/10

Bars of steel breakdown!

Kiddo's a lame, how do I put this into your brain?
That I'll "Smash Sonic" Like "Breaking Old Video Games" *
Nice punch,original an nice play on tha name...8/10

And I dont give a fuck if this faggot said he the best....
17-1?? Ok, let's talk about how you had your record reset! **
Personal hit hard,I like ths bar cuz it was personal...but couldve been used better..7/10

I'll open your face like surgeons do, herb its true...
That the only thing "Sonic Is Good For Now a days"
.................................................. .Is "Serving Food"
knock his ass out with this line here....NICE! 10/10

He thinks he's the shit, like he "Must Be The Greatest" There is
But let's be serious........................................... ...
His accomplishments are about as blank as his sig!! ***
I almost didnt catch this cuz tha structure was a lil off but tha closer was nice too...good personal!7/10

Bars got this hands down...~Sonofisis~ you need ta work on ur punches,no hate juss elevate,str8 up an down,WORD!

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