C. Ghost
Aye buzin u aint cold n u don't keep no steel, stop
Matta fact u from memphis,tell me 1 dude in ya hood thas still hot
No.....Wack... 0/10
Rvz pimp so i guess u pull chicks
My rhyme lines like bullets cuz i load 16 on u like a full clip
No.. A bit played out...0/10
C.ghost u aint heard a me u gots ta know
When i drop my verse like a dam in da river it'll stop ya flow
An okay attempt at a punch...1/10
Or i take it to the memphis language,"stop it ho"
Somebody shoulda told u i rock wit flow
Self glory diss's is what i want to here..0/10
And niggas smoke afta a loss so afta this battle go out and copt some drow

We opposites,
U stop, I go
I win, u don't
I will, u wont

I Know im Nice i give a fuck about a vote
And u a pimp wit money so if i see ya fancy car in the street i Jack it like a coat(jacket)
HAHAHA no!!! Elevate
And every thing i saw niggaz dint know iy was my style that they moldin
And u aint no balla only silver in ya mouth is the gun dat im holdin
No...come harder.. 0/10
Neva 4 get wit my style u gon remember me
U da pimp out of memphis, u aint Terrance howard this aint hustle n flow
I move fool ass niggaz around ta corners sayin hustle n go

No 0/10

Elevate on everything. Punches were weak strucutre was ok. flow was bad. Multis an personals werent even a consideration you dint have any... You were nothing but self glory. Diss you opponent... 1/10

Cold Steel

This battles Gravy...But!..I dont need No~Toast!
"He Wanna Be Patrick Swayze" Peep tha name...See~Ghost.(C.Ghost)
Nice wordplay....8/10
He's weak Folks!....Hidin your Record,but word seem tah Travel.
I think ur ah Joke,Because You Complain ery'time you lost a Battle!
okay... bit og a multis too. 7/10
Look fool Your Wack!.......So why you constantly Happy!?!
You off track... Imma hand you a"L" ta match tha 1 with ur aunt Jackie!
No, dont know where you got aunt jackie... 0/10
Yeah,thats right!.... Cold pimp hard on ah Hoe!
Fuck ownin this Dike!...I rather do 'em like trash an Disgard of his flow!
good punch/closure 8/10

Good overall verse. Flow was good strucutre was good. I think you only had one multi in there come with more... You had good wordplay to an your verse was interesting to read....

Breakdown
punches-Cold
personals-Cold
flow-Cold
strucutre-Cold
complexity- Cold
creativity-Cold
wordplay-Cold
multis-Cold

v/ Cold for harder hitting punches personals an all aroun verse. He won this hands down..

I dont have 100 posts so i can only leave good feed. g/l with this.

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