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Old 08-28-05, 11:58 AM   #30
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one mic's breakdown!


yo c'mon man i think its best if you stay off this site/
i aint even sure if you got the balls to type/
Weak opener,and tha punch was invisible...1/10

you callin yourself ill, c'mon man you only got 4 posts/
im'a let off ur secret about you jerkin off to gay porn wit the door closed/
Fake personals get no vote from me...cuz its stupid,not even Real!0/10

"If he's lucky, he will die young", well thats some belief/
i run the streets, your wackness'll cause nutin but beef/
Weak an played..no punch at all...couldve been better..2/10

you getting pleased cuz UNF sed you were tite/
he woz bein sarcastic, c’mon we all know that you aint nice/
a lil personal,but wasnt nuffin ta really say it was 1..4/10

pm’d me callin me a “cookie”, no I’m a man/
call yourself masculine when you probably tried getting breast implants
Hey!...This didnt even rhyme,sorta like tha whole reason for rapping is rhyme'n tha words..sounds like a convo...bad closer..3/10 cuz tha personal on cookie!

WhAt EvEr It TaKeS break down!

this kid's a 'mermaid', everything he spits is half 'bitch like'
how your throwing fast punches? mic can't even pitch right
i'd say your nice 'butt' your verse is 'shit' where'd you get it
fuck, he Stole it from my toilet, i should have you arrested
why you laughing your talent's Hawaii on a fucking atlas
i dont molest kids but i'll rape and tear throuh that whackness
don't joke around, you need a dictionary for your text an
and the day your dope is the day our president is mexican
okay i give up, naw man, i'd rather take this kid's 'one mic'
lols sorry you waisted my time but dissing yourself was fun right?

I really dont have ta break it down cuz any1 thats anybody can see that WhAt EvEr It TaKeS won this..better punches an lil personals..aiight structure...Really!
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