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Old 08-28-05, 12:56 PM   #20
.Mystique.
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Fraud
U Dont Want Beef Or You'll Trigger My Inc, So Obay Your Boss..
You Aint Dieting On Mc's So Like Fat People Weight, Ur Expecting A Loss..
Lol ok 7/10

My Punches Like 'The-Art-Of-War, Stabing You With Sharp Objects From 'Hardware-Stores'
Lemme Break This 'PIMP' Like Ya Got 'Larger-Pores'..' Cumming' To Get a 'Beat'in', I've Seen 'SMARTER WHORES'!!
Good multi...8/10
U Winnin' Battles? Just A 'Matter Of Interaction' - Nothin SHORT-OF-PHYSICS,
Damn U Still Here? I'll Just Leave Your Career Here Short-Lived Like ABORTED-MIDGETS
HAHA good closure 9/10

Good punches multis metaphors an wordplay. Elevate on personals i didnt see ne in there. Work on your strucutre a little flow was good..

New Edition

Playa thinks his "fat" spitter, ou.............eat me like piece of cake,
just eat,cauze "NEW" cake doesnt choke,it makes ur insides brake.
Dont get it...0/10
And fuck that solo told me to take new teacher....i dont,
Im not like u fraud, my only homework is get beat ya.
Nooo 0/10
But you are with stupid........... so u cant type ur words,
cauze bitch doesnt duck in "net" he looks competitors.
dont rhyme 0/10

elevate on punches an personals. New wordplay would be nice your rhymes were played...

v/ Fraud for harder hitting punches an personals.
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