Voted For: GKillaz05

Gkillaz

DI man, CI man hope that you really like to lose chump...
Dimans spit is very cold body must be full of goosebumps...
okay
Gettin' fucked like a loose rump... and he seems to like it....
You dont excite shit your below iight y dont you just quit...
ok
Your lines cant progress, there going in circles like a relay...
Readin' your battles is like watchin' a movie n hitten replay...
Good
There all the same, borin' n lame makin' us snore is ya game..
Hopin' your shit pre-write, puts me to sleep, what a shame...
Ok
Kids to lame, like a movie that wont just get to the point....
Sorry to disappoint, but your not even on a roll wit a joint...
good closure

Nice multis an punches along with personals. Id enjoyed your verse. Elevate with more word play is all i can say.

Di man

your last battle was recycled, soft and played.
and how am i wack, when dimans get you layed?
NO
your the same ole, nothing new like maples in canada.
matches give you asthma huh, ya like retarded stamina.
No
a W could be yours, might i write the rest soberly.
gkillaz is figurative in battles, but literal with def poetry.
ok
youll write ya own i hope, instead of 9ths quote for quote.
and if i lose...ill know they based the votes on posts.
No

You had ok punches. Nothing special. elevate on personals an multis. you had none of those. your wordplay was decent... v/ Gkillaz for harder hitting punches.

Rtf to this battle plz.. Much appreciated.
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