Voted For: Drama Queen

got deadly visions, nightmares of bein this bad dream, that puts niggaz to sleep like the father that had me
erm not good
makin bad scenes in the middle of Krogers,
tellin me to shut up pull down my pants and bend over,
aight i suppose
that made me the grown man that u fear today,
starin thru any crew gettin in my way,
aight
havin these visions of me bein a legend,
peerin thru my own soul so iknow this iz where i'm headin',
like deep
but hatin dudes, i'm like superman, i'll use my x-ray
laser vision lyricism and bring it to this essay,
aight
to let u know that Morpheus controls the visions of others,
put u in perfect peace and u'll still be sein my colors,
liked nice vocab
and patterns, whatever's on the bottom of my shoe,
i'm out of shape, but i'm still able to run thru crews,
self glorifiying
i'm startin to see things in a whole new light,
now know the truth, u gotta be wrong, i'm always right
aight
and no hatin between our crews baby, we all right
u can be like me on my pc, yo i'm on all night
aight
but really my lyrics iz a sight for sore eyes,and a eyesore, to hatin brothaz that wish that they could take away my life force,
nice vocab
but most hataz got 'deadly vision' wishin they could stare holes thru me,
yeah right, most of these asses literally wanna screw me, let me do me homey i can only beat myself,
nah
i see the future one of us will die but i'ma keep my health.
erm this is pretty basic flow was good aight in some parts but meh.........................

Drama:nice shit all the way thru good emotion i dont think you needed to try that hard but good loved the vocab real good shit the endin woz real deep loved this peice

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