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Old 08-28-05, 03:51 PM   #13
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Voted For: Intermental

Bullets Burst-Precision, Cant ‘See Me’ I ‘Hurt-Ya-Vision’
And They Will No Doubt ‘Cut Off The Stan’ Like A ‘Circumcision’!!
rofl nice opener 4/5

The Knife-To-Ya-Chest, Swipe-N-Ya-Breath, Put This Dike-To-His-Rest
Much ‘Respect To BIG’, But This Time There Is No ‘Life-After-Death’!!
lol nice use of multis 3.5/5
il incision~lyrics, beat u in “text” and add sum “visions~with it”/
like how im quick to walk through “STAN'S barz like “prison~visits”//
lol nice punch connected well
like “jigsaw puzzles” ur rhyming is “outa place” so INTER shud make a note/
to use more multis…coz u cudnt hit a “flow” if u fell out a “boat”//
lol nice closer

straight up battle verse i see nice use of multis nice flow good punches attempt at personals good verse

you sound like a bitch with the biggest discrace//
callin me out, im about to put chu in your own place//
worded badly needs work but ok
Intermental should switch his ass into heavy metal//
its getting personal , your about to be disabled//
nah dnt rhyme
dont ever think u could come in my thread & insult me//
listen up and take a note of my new key/can u see me//
used same thing 2wice but w/e
imma beat chu and put chur ass in FEDEX//
im wasting time chatting, especially my cre-DEETS//...
nah dont work but w/e

oyu look like you need elevation but ok for a n00b good try work on ya punches flow was aight
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